Falling down

So, I wrote this bit of a song. I'm not a songwriter, that's for sure. please comment and let me know what you think!

It's gonna be a long week
I feel the weight
crashing down,
crashing down
around me.
I'm not safe,
no longer safe,
from it all.
Watch closely,
as my tower falls,
falls down.

(chorus)
I've been crying and
crying, but I've got
no tears.
I've been crying and
crying, but it doesn't
do any good, not
anymore.
The walls are
crashing down,
crashing down
all around me.
I'm trapped.
Oh, I'm trapped


So that's my song. Sort of. Its a work in progress.
Anywho, today was better. And I'm going to catch up in classes because I feel productive right now. Yes!
Anna~ I miss you a hell of a lot, too! I'd call you and talk, but I don't know the time difference, and letters are so much more special. :)

Challenge of the day: Pass on a smile to someone you don't know in the hallway, or talk to someone you've never talked to before. Its nice for everyone :)